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How To Optimize This Landing Page ?

Discussion in 'Testing, Optimization and Scaling' started by aditan, May 26, 2018.

  1. aditan

    aditan Affiliate affiliate

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    I have launched mobile offer campaign about free iPhone X and i use this landing page. But this landing page only has 1.8% CTR. What is the problem with this landing page ? How can i improve this landing page ?

    I'd really appreciate any suggestions. Thank you.

    landing page example.png
     
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  3. Graybeard

    Graybeard Well-Known Member affiliate

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    Your CTA button is bad
    Try 'Answer to WIN!'
     
  4. BillJobs

    BillJobs Affiliate affiliate

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    where did you make this landing page ? - is it a website or just a single landing page? - did you have to buy the domain name? is this mailchimp by any chance?
     
  5. azgold

    azgold Super Moderator Super Mod moderator affiliate

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    Also, you have an error in your text...

    upload_2018-5-26_23-12-35.png

    That should say...

    Take out the word, "from"
     
  6. Graybeard

    Graybeard Well-Known Member affiliate

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    Actually, looking at the copy -- the English grammar is very poor.
    Funny English creates red flags.
     
  7. aditan

    aditan Affiliate affiliate

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    Thanks for the advice, i'll try to fix the grammar and CTA button as you suggested
     
  8. aditan

    aditan Affiliate affiliate

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    It's a single landing page i got from spy tool and then i customize a bit. Yes i buy the domain name for this site and i didn't use mailchimp
     
  9. aditan

    aditan Affiliate affiliate

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    Thanks but it's actually not an error, it should be "You are chosen from city for a chance..." and the city is generated by tracking software. But because i screenshot the site from my local computer, the city doesn't appear.
     
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  10. BillJobs

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    What is the exact “spy tool” website and how did you make the actual landing page ?
     
  11. azgold

    azgold Super Moderator Super Mod moderator affiliate

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    How it works is, you use your favourite spy tool, find a landing page that's doing well then rip and customize it. You either need to know how to work with the code, or have someone do that part for you.
     
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