Please review my flat share page. I really appreciate it!

[webdesigner1980]

Hi guys, this is the most important page on my flat share website:

Flat Share - Why do people Flatshare and House share? - RoomBuddies.com , i need your

reviews, because i am getting traffic but very little conversions, am

not sure if i am doing something wrong.

Thanks!
thomas - Flat share, Houseshare, Rooms for Rent & Rooms to Let – Roombuddies.com

 

[surreypcsupport]

You only have about 5 seconds from the moment a visitor lands on the page to the moment they decide whether to read on or leave the site.

Try adding a single phrase that will get the readers interest and persuade them that it is worth their time to read on. Place it in primary position just below the banner and in the middle of the page. Make it bigger than everything else on the page. Make sure it is clickable.

 

[seohp]

Everything looks good, just try to promote it and add some more contents...