New Landing Pages (Feedback PLEASE!)

[BreakthroughPsy]

Hi Folks,

May I request some serious feedback on the following two Landing Pages for this new site? Which one do you prefer? What is missing?

A: Breakthrough Program - Homepage2
B: Clickbank Page - Breakthrough Program

Thanks!

Erik Lenderman

 

[sgaffiliate]

I believe that you are still changing the pages.

Basic alignment of text and duplicate of web section has to be iron out.

It's better to comment when web design is closer to completion.

Some comments:

• The articles menu list too many links
• Too many wording and sections. I am lost when reading your page.

 

[askmense]

i like the design though