Can i get an honest opinion on these landing pages?

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I have to post something before i can post a link so here is something.

 

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The Smoothie Diet

You rush about to meet the demands of your life each day. Who has time to cook healthy, well-balanced meals every day when you are juggling all that? Unfortunately, the ‘quick and easy’ food choices are often the worst options for your body, but they

smoothiediet.getresponsepages.com

Get your custom Keto Diet

customketo1.subscribemenow.com

Manifestation Gods

manifestationgods.gr8.com

 

[PureLander]

Have you made them yourself or you ripped them from somewhere?
Let's be HONEST, I appreciate the efforts. but they look really messy ..

The first one needs some change for the fonts (This is after some changes)

For this one, you rather change the headline font + color it's not readable! You can also change the picture if possible ..

For the last one, instead of this :

Try this :

- Samira

 

[Graybeard]

Mobile layout is bad.
Very mediocre --the TOP 5 needs to be darkgreen of a higher contrast.

If your objective is to subscribe the location is poor Most people wont read that far.

Using a banner as a CTA in place of a button is a poor idea and people have what is called banner blindness and just have trained themselves to ignore banners. Special offer use code# or save $x and a button with a clever text works ...

 

[OscarMike]

The custom keto diet landing page has the headline blending in with the background poorly. It's difficult to read the headline.

 

[Honeybadger]

The Smoothie Diet

You rush about to meet the demands of your life each day. Who has time to cook healthy, well-balanced meals every day when you are juggling all that? Unfortunately, the ‘quick and easy’ food choices are often the worst options for your body, but they

smoothiediet.getresponsepages.com

Get your custom Keto Diet

customketo1.subscribemenow.com

Manifestation Gods

manifestationgods.gr8.com

Who are your main competitors?
By that I mean in the space you are promoting these offers
Post the top 3 URL links please

 

[Honeybadger]

Have you seen this?
Conversion Wise on YouTube

 

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Mobile layout is bad.
Very mediocre --the TOP 5 needs to be darkgreen of a higher contrast.

If your objective is to subscribe the location is poor Most people wont read that far.

Using a banner as a CTA in place of a button is a poor idea and people have what is called banner blindness and just have trained themselves to ignore banners. Special offer use code# or save $x and a button with a clever text works ...

Thank you for the input. I really do apricate it.

 

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Have you made them yourself or you ripped them from somewhere?
Let's be HONEST, I appreciate the efforts. but they look really messy ..

The first one needs some change for the fonts (This is after some changes)
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For this one, you rather change the headline font + color it's not readable! You can also change the picture if possible ..

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For the last one, instead of this :
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Try this :
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- Samira

I made them myself they are first attempts. I don't have a partner or anybody else i can bounce ideas from.

 

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View attachment 22300
Mobile layout is bad.
Very mediocre --the TOP 5 needs to be darkgreen of a higher contrast.

If your objective is to subscribe the location is poor Most people wont read that far.

Using a banner as a CTA in place of a button is a poor idea and people have what is called banner blindness and just have trained themselves to ignore banners. Special offer use code# or save $x and a button with a clever text works ...

Thank you I appreciate the input and criticism.