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Discussion in 'Introductions' started by darkdrift, Jan 23, 2006.

  1. darkdrift

    darkdrift Guest

    Hi, I am wondering if anyone could proof read my letter to invite affiliates to join with me. I was trying to get across the point that I care about my affiliates and will work towards there success, because it is a mutual gain, and they keep 75% ...so here it is
     
  2. Linda Buquet

    Linda Buquet <span style="color: #daa520;font-weight: bold;">Me

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    Hi Chris,

    Welcome to 5 Star. Thanks for sharing your program info with us. I skimmed your letter and it looks like you did a good job.
     
  3. my2cents

    my2cents New Member

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    Welcome...

    I will say upfront ... I'm not a politically correct king of person...

    I am more of the beat you with a club up in your face kind of guy...

    so without further fuss...

    poor grammar and confusing

    a deal breaker for most astute affiliates - you need to asure that we are going to be paid for our sales and how that is tracked... especially with LiveChat on yoursite

    confusing grammar

    more confusing grammar

    Now that you have been bludgened... I feel much better :D

    and hopefully your learned something.. useful!

    Is english your first language?

    Joe
     
  4. darkdrift

    darkdrift Guest

    Yes, english is my first language....OUCH...

    In my defence- :) -

    1) it was 3am in the morning when i wrote this
    2) I didn't edit it at all yet, OR read it, just wrote it and clicked go!
    3) I pasted half of it from another letter i personally wrote to someone else, so that might explain some 'ackwardness'


    But anyways, thanks for being blunt, sometimes its the best way, now let me go about fixing this 'bloody mess' haha.
     
  5. Linda Buquet

    Linda Buquet <span style="color: #daa520;font-weight: bold;">Me

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    I can afford to be nice and diplomatic, cuz I know Joe will always come to tell it like it is! :p He made some good points.
     
  6. Linda Buquet

    Linda Buquet <span style="color: #daa520;font-weight: bold;">Me

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    I can afford to be nice and diplomatic, cuz I know Joe will always come to tell it like it is! :p He made some good points.

    You know I can't proof my own copy even when I try. I knew EXACTLY what I meant to say therefore I can't see my mistakes.
     
  7. my2cents

    my2cents New Member

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    well see, you learned something today...

    #1 rule of marketing... never, never submit anything you created when you should be sleepin :D

    I personally know the message you wantedto convey... but I'm not your average target affiliate...

    I'm sure you already know this... your first impression may be your only impression..

    best of success with you program..

    JOe
     
  8. Heuerproductions

    Heuerproductions New Member

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    Ouch!

    Professionalism Wins everytime!

    Even though Joe's comments kinda scratched it was true. I've learned to never write anything for my company when I'm drained and need to sleep. ;)
    You were brave to share this with us and for that I respect you very much. :) learning is an on- going process and we've all encountered the same road blocks.
     

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